For a first edit, that was actually very good. I couldn't tell if you were shooting on a handheld camcorder or you didn't know how to use a dslr. So if thats dslr, then you should learn to properly shoot vid (a million youtube videos on it) but if not, keep doing what you're doing. The intro was way way to long for the 7 or so shots haha. Color correcting was a bit funky, but that's alright. Apart from the intro the flow was there so I say, very good first edit, a couple minor tweaks and you will be well on your way to being Level 1… sorta