Wild One. New video would love critique!

[slc_utahboiii]

Collection of shots from this past year, would love some feedback, bad good, let me know!

[video]https://vimeo.com/139168588[/video]

 

[xnick11]

I thought it was good overall. If I were to change anything I would to reorder shots a bit more to help tell a more compelling story. Starting from all of you summer shots and somehow transiting into all of the snow shots or vice versa. Think of each activity as a "scene or section". To spruce things up even more I would have recorded short interviews to better explain all of the "fun times" you experienced at these places. The interviews can be while at the location or even after you filmed everything. Other than creating a more compelling story out of what you have, I think its a really cool montage of what you did from this past year. I'm sure your friends really loved the outcome of what you did. Good work and keep on shooting!

 

[slc_utahboiii]

I thought it was good overall. If I were to change anything I would to reorder shots a bit more to help tell a more compelling story. Starting from all of you summer shots and somehow transiting into all of the snow shots or vice versa. Think of each activity as a "scene or section". To spruce things up even more I would have recorded short interviews to better explain all of the "fun times" you experienced at these places. The interviews can be while at the location or even after you filmed everything. Other than creating a more compelling story out of what you have, I think its a really cool montage of what you did from this past year. I'm sure your friends really loved the outcome of what you did. Good work and keep on shooting!

thanks for the feedback man! appreciate it. I thought the same thing myself about the order of my shots, and realized I was too deep into editing to take that approach, I guess I was more basing it off a video I did last year,

[video]https://vimeo.com/107314453[/video]

 

[slc_utahboiii]

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