thanks,
say if I shouldn't say this or if it is used incorrectly in an essay to get into CU boulder.
(my paper is about me overcoming migraiens to accomplish my goals. I get migraines everyday and they suck).
"I developed good study habits to avoid procrastination, which can, with migraines, be as dangerous as a Colorado State fan on the Boulder campus. If I wait until the last minute to finish a project, and my migraine is as painful as a loss to Nebraska, my project would suffer an agonizing defeat also."