this is just my opinion. the first edit for kohl's promo was posted over in the movie maker crew where i commented on it there. this edit is definately a lot better, the first being way to slow.
anyway like a said the first time around, i think the cliff drop should have been taken out. reps/managers see a lot of peeps videos/new talent out there and it degrades from the rest of the video, especially since it was the only drop. im not ragging on him for BC or anything but you have to realise the impression that gives to potential sponsors. everything in a promo video should be "promoting" you, and the cliff drop really doesnt "promote" you in anyway.
the only thing else is with a promo vid you really do want to show variety as a skier. some of the tricks seemed redundant. i think you are a good skier but to promote yourself you have to be showing how you bring something to the sport that no one else does. it just kinda felt like a lot of the tricks in the vid were repeated, thats all.
other than that, to the haters you just talk shit, at least this guy kohl is putting together a promo vid and making an effort.