All and all pretty good but you could use some work on your filming and editing... Keep your shots steady when shooting long lens by either using a tripod or just getting closer so you don't have to zoom as much... Try and incorporate the rule of thirds to make your shots look a little more "professional" and appealing to the eye... And finally just try and get a little arty by framing your shots with objects, using dutch tilts, "pedestal" shots, exc...