What do you think of my dance track

[jarossamdb7]

maybe more variation in instruments. Its a work in progress, and Im a beginner. Constructive feedback appreciated.
http://soundcloud.com/skillett/skillet

 

[Bukkakeskitrip]

makes me feel like im in a space jungle

 

[Abc567def]

not my type of music, sorry don't know what to say

 

[wh@t]

wah liao i dunno if you could call that dance music, but whatever. do you have any musical background?

 

[jarossamdb7]

no background, especially not in making anything. I used to play piano back in the day