What do you think? Critics needed!

[JibFrost]

Hey please watch this video and let me know what you think. you cant get better at editing without some critics pointing out your flaws.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AGXNFo4Hwl0

 

[EricCartman]

didn't even jump off anything that high

 

[JibFrost]

i mean editing wise, what do you think?

 

[youngdtay]

Cool it on the slowmo, less intro, lose a lot of any shots you think are borderline lame. Edit seems really bloated.

 

[funk~]

It's more efficient to put this type of thing in Media and Arts man, you'll get more people who actually want to look at a video and give feedback.

 

[JibFrost]

yeah i did i feel like not that many people look at those threads though :/ thanks for watching it though +k to all

 

[LoathesRaisins]

Certainly not as much traffic, but the guys that browse in there know what they're talking about.

 

[Sophistication.]

Editing wise, you should have taken out like 5 or six shots that were poorly done. The one where the guy on the tramp is jumping behind the tree and you can't see shit is irritating.

Anyway, it takes a lot of confidence to post this on a public forum, especially one like newschoolers and I appreciate that. Thanks for letting me in on your summer

 

[Kazabazua]

I couldn't watch it, that song was terrible.

 

[JibFrost]

thank you for all the constructive criticism +k to all

 

[Wolfgang.]

I felt like it had a bit too much filler. Don't be afraid to make am edit shorter than the song, you can always find a way to cut the song. Other than that I thought it was good!

 

[dvx100]

needs more cowbell

 

[timmi]

mam made productions?

 

[Peter.]

where was that waterfall, that place looks incredible

 

[SamMcChesney]

this edit is terrible along with all the tricks in it

 

[JibFrost]

its a local spot near Steamboat Springs in Colorado

 

[act.resist]

Why do people even watch things like this?

 

[Laurent.]

Why do people make two threads about this?

https://www.newschoolers.com/ns/forums/readthread/thread_id/752289/

 

[act.resist]

Why do people even make threads?

 

[howlongcanausern]

Why do anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?

 

[Laurent.]

Why do you cite 4chan?

 

[lineskier10]

way too much slow mo, was there anything that wasnt? and do cooler shit off cliffs

 

[Kirklife]

I would cut out a lot of the attempted artsy close-up transition shots. Unless you have a nicer camera with more selective focus, they look somewhat silly.