What do you think about my edit ?

Headless-G

Headless-G

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Well as I just said, what do you think about my edit, I've done something "uncommon" to try a kind of "new style".

Hit me up if you find something interesting in there !
 
Well half the edit is just a black screen so I would change that. I understand the intro as far as the talking but it should be shorter and have what I call Filler shots. Then the actual skiing should follow that. So if you use that talking still have it in sync with Filler shots meaning things like driving to the mountain, putting skis on ETC. there are numerous ways to get creative and be original with this part.
 
13746060:T-Lan_District said:
Well half the edit is just a black screen so I would change that. I understand the intro as far as the talking but it should be shorter and have what I call Filler shots. Then the actual skiing should follow that. So if you use that talking still have it in sync with Filler shots meaning things like driving to the mountain, putting skis on ETC. there are numerous ways to get creative and be original with this part.
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Yeah I found that there's to much blackscreen, It should be great with filler shot, but my bad I did'nt had filler shot.

Thanks for the "review" !!!
 
Heyo,

In order to not create another "Rate my edit" thread I'll just post it in this one.

Hope you like it!
=20s
 
it was more like 20 seconds of blank screen filler and then a few shots.

first of all cut out the beginning... whatever that was. The intro should not be longer than the actual skiing part...

The skiing itself was cool I guess but there wasn't much variety other than a few shots of you buttering and ollie-ing.
 
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