Website i just created... need some feedback

iLLbiLLy

iLLbiLLy

Active member
i just got done creating the website for my "production". Its the

first one ive ever made and i dont have 2 much experance with flash.

Feedback would be greatly appraited, i can take critismum*sp so tell me

what you think. btw just incase you were wondering about the shitty

top boarder its a time lapses of a day and it changes depending on what

hour and what min. it is. this is being posted in multipul cult froms for various reasons so if u see it twice dont freak out

http://www.hajproductions.com
 
looks good, but a couple suggestions. your news heading doesnt have the same animation as the rest, so just to make things more uniform i'd hook that up. also, it seems like spelling isnt your forte. having tons of spelling mistakes on your site makes it seem unproffesional. type everything into word first, or have someone proofread it before you upload or something. anyway, those are just very minor things, so all in all, keep up the good work
 
i think i fixed most of the stuff u just said^. and i added a new NEWS page witch i think looks a little better. still workin out the kinks tho
 
one: the file is huge.. two: lose the mouseover noise.. very distracting. three: change the text at the bottom from a serif to a sans-serif. You've kind of limited your space for content though to a mere roughly 600px X 300px. unless u are going to use xml loaded text and scroll it you could run into some problems fitting all the information you may have.

other than that looks good, and the clock is nice
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top