Video: Graffiti-Jam

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I made an edit about three artists spraying (legally) at a Graffiti-Jam in Emmen Switzerland.I know, the colors could def. be better... ;)

but otherwise... what's good - what's not?

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[http://www.vimeo.com/30375589]

thx for your time!
 
Good job man! I liked how you added in some lifestyle/nature shots without really taking away from the painting. Classic song choice too! One thing that I might have liked to have seen would be better, more up-close shots of the finished pieces.
 
thanks man!You are absolutly right in that point, I should have taken more shots of the end... but I had to leave the place earlier, so I wasn't able to do that.

keep the constructive criticism coming!
 
I actually really like the soft, desaturated look of the colors. It is very fitting with the song and the soft focus shots.One quick thing - try to not cut to black. There is a section somewhere in the middle that you cut to the beat to black a few times in a row that was pretty distracting.
 
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