Video Critique (Out of my element)

[T-Sin]

I have been hired to run media / advertising at a local car dealership that sells bad ass cars / imports / trucks... ect..

I have been doing some videos for certain cars on the lot, and I just wanted some people to weigh in on the example below (if you would like)

angles / music / vibe / whatever ... I just want the video to be as bad ass as the cars are, and want some criticism and suggestions if you may have any. thanks!

 

[T-Sin]

Not sure why it wont embed, but here is the link:

 

[fries]

the video is private, it wont let me see it

 

[MNSkiers]

the video is private, it wont let me see it

^

 

[.otto.]

the video is private, it wont let me see it

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