To be honest... I'd say its pretty dark, and the background is kind of distracting.
I say keep skiing and grinding away, If you got the passion you can turn that into a rad edit.
I'm by no means a pro at this kind of thing.... But
If you film at night I think you can usually get better shots with a little more light. You might be able to use your car headlights or a cheap flood light to shine on whatever feature you are hitting, that way it isnt so dark and blurry. A cool Idea might be to wear glowsticks... Could come off tacky, but might be sick if well executed. I really liked that shot of you clicking into your bindings, I think that would be a perfect little intro/hook. Its quick, cool and tells everybody "I am about to ski" without dragging the viewer along on.
Good luck