This is all I've done all day.

[Nathn]

Please give me some feedback on it.
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[skiblandford]

it was decent, thought it was a bit repetative. If it were up to me i would add some more beats like a good bass and just change it up a bit add some "surprises"

 

[LIL_WAT]

That was pretty good man. It reminds me slightly of the Loose Change soundtrack which was (I think) mixed by DJ Skooly (sp)

 

[Benson23]

all day? , i liked it though good job. At least your doing something semi productive.

 

[Chompo.]

pretty cool. but i agree that it needed some bass

 

[SirFryanator]

Nice one dude! I agree, MOAR BASS.

 

[I_Am_Mod]

mix some rap with it....

 

[Nathn]

I have a big juicy sub in there haha I'm just gonna have to mess with the frequency until you can hear it as much as you can feel it I guess.

 

[SirFryanator]

Get some more kick in the snare, boost the mid-low frequencies and the mid-high frequencies and I'm down to do some flowing over this one too. NS collab mixtape? lolz

 

[yojimbo]

ehhh.

 

[@fterB@ngz]

i think you should change the tone of the repetitive sound at the beginning sometime. other then that pretty legit

 

[Nathn]

For sure!

 

[pussymoneyweed]

thats so sick. deffinitley post it again in this thread when you make the bass stand out. it will deffinitley be on my ipod!

 

[Nathn]

Glad you like it!

 

[Shadows]

its 2:20 pm. i just woke up. good work

 

[nychka]

I would make the snare shorter/ knock harder

Add a bassline

Tweak the main synth/ find diff sound altogether (sounds a lil corny imo)

Maybe think about upping the tempo/ swing quantizing? kinda feels like the beat is dragging, groove isn't in the pocket yet

All just suggestions, good work. What program you runnin?

 

[Nathn]

Ableton Live 8. Thanks for the criticism too, I'm gonna fix it up quite a bit.

 

[theabortionator]

I used to use fruity loops and reason and make some stuff. Mostly electro

 

[gabe.]

to high pitched

 

[Nathn]

More Recent Version:

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[pussymoneyweed]

so sick man where can i dl?

 

[Spinoza]

i like it,

whatever that new sound you added is (synthesizer or something, i have no idea) it sounds good.

all its lacking now is a rapper and pounding beat

 

[Nathn]

Bump for new beat.
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I have to fix the little solo deal at the end a lot but I don't want to right now.

 

[Benson23]

How and where did you make that? is there an online beat maker or did you uplaod it to your computer?

 

[Nathn]

haha no I used Ableton Live for it. It's a DAW.

 

[will-g]

threads for later

 

[Nathn]

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