The girl who was raped by a rat.

just a story i needed to get off my chest. i let this girl get raped by this kid i hate.

i let her go into the hands of the unwanted. Into the hands of my enemy. The face of scaled acne and years of inbred incest. A crooked nose complimented by an ugly blanket of black haird, streaked with blonde, perhaps a desperate attempt for uniqueness. I warned her not to go. I begged her, but what could i do? She was drunk and her mind was in the state of simplicity. The night continued and i all but forgot about her. It was when i awoke in the morning to teenage rambling that i learned the truth. the girl i let go and would not help wasraped and devoured by an enemy. the rat of humanity, the perve with the hunch back and frail features. i let her go
 
i agree. but next time you are trying to tell a story just tell it and cut all the medaphorical crap because your not good at it.
 
baisically what happened is that this guy hates this other guy and he let this chick go off with him and she got raped... and the kid had acne, and a bunch of problems that make you probibly just want to hit the kid... correct me if i'm wrong.
 
yeah sorry i wrote it way STONED. i just read that shit sober ohh well. but let me write it sober. some wack ass ugly kid raped my friend and it was pretty much my fault.
 
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Why are some of you making fun of him for feeling bad about his friend being raped? Get a fucking sense of humanity people...seriously.
 
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