IceTeaanMilk
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Here is a experimentalish song I made yesterday. Preferably listen with speakers that can play bass frequencies. Tell me what you think.http://soundcloud.com/recessionproof/not-my-paradise
Songy I made
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panojibber
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Thats some IDM you've got there!
Post that shit on: idmforums.com
I guarantee people will like it more there and give you better feedback haha.
Rhythmically it was a little weird. Like, you've got an on beat arpeggiator, and then a kind of dub-ish beat underneath. Maybe that was what you're going for, but I'd suggest you try to make your drums and other parts of your track interact. Like, write one part so it sounds good with the others. Know what I mean?
The track kind of lagged at times too. Like, structurally it didn't feel right to me. Some breakouts and other parts seemed out of place. Remember that IDM still uses traditional dance music principles, just different melodies and sounds.
All in all though I thought it was cool. I love anything experimental.
Post that shit on: idmforums.com
I guarantee people will like it more there and give you better feedback haha.
Rhythmically it was a little weird. Like, you've got an on beat arpeggiator, and then a kind of dub-ish beat underneath. Maybe that was what you're going for, but I'd suggest you try to make your drums and other parts of your track interact. Like, write one part so it sounds good with the others. Know what I mean?
The track kind of lagged at times too. Like, structurally it didn't feel right to me. Some breakouts and other parts seemed out of place. Remember that IDM still uses traditional dance music principles, just different melodies and sounds.
All in all though I thought it was cool. I love anything experimental.
Shredability
Active member
Dunno if its some weird funk I'm in these days where I like pretty much everything I listen to but I really liked it, some of the sounds reminded me of idoser and now I feel a little light headed
IceTeaanMilk
Member
Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate it. I agree that the structure is a little off and needs some
work. I'll go back and work on it.
work. I'll go back and work on it.