Song my friends made, what you think?

[Samsquanch]

hey guys my friends made a new song that is a remix to halo, tell me what u think.

Link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M7V3QqDQkP0

 

[DWwashburn]

THIS VIDEO IS UNAVAILABLE

 

[ben_southworth]

THIS VIDEO IS UNAVAILABLE

 

[Samsquanch]

up now

 

[Samsquanch]

up

 

[Dbouch]

Holy Auto-tune....

 

[Samsquanch]

bump becuz it is a sick song and it is only one of the first songs my friends have made

 

[Samsquanch]

heres the embvedded verision

 

[Arabian.]

OH COME ON. if you can't hear just listening to it that the song is horrible, you guys shouldn't try this again. Seriously. Be whiter.

 

[Arabian.]

and yes, it is THAT BAD.

 

[Samsquanch]

tath bad huh?

 

[TheBeardedOne]

That wasn't too bad.. they gotta work on some things but it's a good start. I made it through the whole thing so yeah haha

 

[Samsquanch]

wow who lowers karma fopr this ?

 

[Arabian.]

Rap is dead. plus, whoever the hell is singing has perfect East coast english and no flow whatsoever. The beat WAS good though. everything else [lyrical content cough] sucked.

 

[Samsquanch]

alirght sry maybe were a little s stiposy but u have to like it a lil cmonw

 

[Samsquanch]

just looking for some opinions..no auto tune

 

[Samsquanch]

Arabian ur a douche..just btw..rap is no where near dead i dont know where u live

 

[EasyEast]

dude it really wasnt bad i mean it got old by the end but i liked it for the most part nice job i think it would be better if it was a little faster and certain things weren't over pronounced but overall man not bad no hate from me

 

[no_steeze]

umm singing voice was awful but idk it wasn't terrible

 

[i.am.a.skier.]

yeah it really wasnt that bad?

 

[BootySpunk.]

God Nick whoever sung that was horrible no offense...beat was alright overall i'll give it like a 3 since I couldn't listen past the first minute without getting a headache.

 

[Mooserz]

i one up you with one me and my buddy made one bored day

Ghetto Beats from Diego on Vimeo.

 

[k-rob]

just...no.

 

[Samsquanch]

anyone else?

 

[uni-corn]

I did

 

[Arabian.]

lol me too.

 

[icon1234]

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[bout_it]

haha guilty.

 

[geet]

kid in my school. check it out

 

[duckets.]

how did you edit the voices?

 

[sklermang]

not a fan of the autotuner

 

[duckets.]

bump

 

[lineC88]

the voices def sounded like a fuckin robot!!

start sarcasm....so you put diff words over someone elses beat/song...nice job!...end sarcasm

 

[Samsquanch]

Have u never heard a remix?

 

[thisandthatfilms]

 

[panojibber]

Not really a halo remix, unless I'm mistaken they shuffled the chords (octaves?) around, so it was basically a new song with someone else's chords... I think.
Anyways, it has potential, but the lyrics were really not to my liking, sounded like a big self promotion (and made singer seem really cocky lol), you have to write lyrics that you feel strongly about but other people can still relate to. And get your buddies to check out some material on song structure (bridge, chorus, verse etc etc).
I kept trying to listen to it, but the lyrics just really pissed me off. It made him sound like a cocky high school kid rapping about parents hating on him, and how he was just so sick. REALLY pissed me off. Kid has no problems.
Anyways, fix the lyrics, and figure out what chords/octaves those are, then actually sing along next time hahaha. Not bad though.

 

[Samsquanch]

Yes all we did was write new lyrics to the instumental...thank you though...and yes many of you will not get it because its kind of about us i understand that..but i will put up another song soon that one of my friends made at boarding school...it has good flow to it and i think you guys will like it

 

[yuck]

yay for GarageBand Loops!

 

[Samsquanch]

Some setting on garage band ill ask them tomorrow about it and let u know