Song for my band

Campeador

Campeador

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Tell me what you think. It's about this asshole kid from guatemala who tries to pick fights with the kids at my high school but still plays with toys like a little kid. Its by our new rock band Renbuck and the Friens. The song is about 2 minutes and 30 second long.

Guatemala

You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

Look at yourself you fool, no wonder you have no friends

Guatemala is where you belong so don’t come back again

All the kids laugh cause you don’t know how to read

A bullet in your back is what you really need

But you’re a square and I don’t even care,

Leave before I rip out your fucking gelled hair

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

(Guitar Solo)

You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?

I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

What the hell? You have a Hindu brother?

You’re a piece of shit with a whore for a mother

But this is obvious cause she needs money for her little boys

So she can buy you your fucking toys!!!

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

END OF SONG

 
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rhyme schemes are lame, and the songs lyrics have a lame way of presenting what you think. Thats kinda what a 10 year old withy a foul mouth would say. And fuck is rather distastful in most songs.
 
trust, the whole song could be just saying fuck the whole time and it still would not be distateful. I sing the words fast so the words have to string together and present an angry but clear message. hahahaha.
 
haha after reading it over again i realize its pretty fucked up but i like it as it is so i'm not going to change it.
 
maybe we have been doing the wrong thing all these years.. maybe if we just told immigrants that we didnt want them politely they would understand and leave/stop comming,

but above that they probably come because they know how angry we get about them and think its funny that we get so angry, i bet if we just ignored them they would get bored of it and all go home.
 
hmmm i'm not the first to write a song about another person...

and if you tell me you'd face someone twice as big as you, you'd be lying.
 
right on man.

guatamalens are hairy.

i say if they are called something that is not american, they shouldn't belong here
 
topic:Campeador said:
Tell me what you think. It's about this asshole kid from guatemala who tries to pick fights with the kids at my high school but still plays with toys like a little kid. Its by our new rock band Renbuck and the Friens. The song is about 2 minutes and 30 second long.

Guatemala

You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

Look at yourself you fool, no wonder you have no friends

Guatemala is where you belong so don’t come back again

All the kids laugh cause you don’t know how to read

A bullet in your back is what you really need

But you’re a square and I don’t even care,

Leave before I rip out your fucking gelled hair

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

(Guitar Solo)

You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?

I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

What the hell? You have a Hindu brother?

You’re a piece of shit with a whore for a mother

But this is obvious cause she needs money for her little boys

So she can buy you your fucking toys!!!

Chorus

Cause Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

You fucking little boy...

Playing with your toys...

Guatemala is where you belong!

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

Get the fuck outta here! (All)

END OF SONG
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I'm srs bout that record deal bro, you have a way with words that just touches the soul. Are you the lead guitarist? Damn, that solo ripped, bro!
 
This would've been a great punk song that many a white supremacist and neo nazi could stomp around to. Good job.
 
13764518:TheHamburglar said:
bump again cause I want to know if your band got a record deal or not
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I don't even need to ask about yours.

At least we share in common that both of our "bands" were jokes, just in your case I'm not sure you were in on it.
 
13765496:Campeador said:
I don't even need to ask about yours.

At least we share in common that both of our "bands" were jokes, just in your case I'm not sure you were in on it.
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Ah, don't be so modest, man, your music really has potential! If you ever make it out to LA and are looking for someone to produce and record your music, I've got access to studios! Hit me up!

Renbuck and the Friens are the next big thing!
 
13765507:Campeador said:
You are so fucking stupid.

You've just been outwitted by a 17 year-old from a decade ago. Sounds about right.
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The nice folks at the Independent Artist Program loved your lyrics so much, they have offered to fly you and the Friens out to America, land of the free, to record your album!

Call me and we'll get you set up! 1-800-854-7771
 
13765519:TheHamburglar said:
The nice folks at the Independent Artist Program loved your lyrics so much, they have offered to fly you and the Friens out to America, land of the free, to record your album!

Call me and we'll get you set up! 1-800-854-7771
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The sad part is, I'd probably have more success than your poor band.

Are you still doing Battle of the Bands in front of a handful of high school kids? Or did you just give up and find solace in smoking yourself retarded day after day?
 
"You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?

I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew"

It's lines like these that represent the purely poetic subtleties of the English language. I LOVE what you did with the rhyme schemes, so unpredictable!

Seriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago. KK g2g work now, keep in touch so we can set dates to record!
 
13765528:TheHamburglar said:
"You came to America and we don’t want you here

You have your hair slicked back and you look like a queer

What are you going to do when La Migra finds you?

I’ll come a cut you up with my whole fucking crew"

It's lines like these that represent the purely poetic subtleties of the English language. I LOVE what you did with the rhyme schemes, so unpredictable!

Seriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago. KK g2g work now, keep in touch so we can set dates to record!
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Only an absolute moron could get trolled this badly.
 
13765528:TheHamburglar said:
Seriously though, you had a room full of people laughing at you a few minutes ago.
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Are you talking about man-boobs and those other two guys you play "music" with?

Nice haircut by the way.

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You should thank me for being one of only 23 views your poor band was able to generate.
 
Hey bro, everyone likes your song so much, we're gonna go ahead and submit it for copyright along with some other new artists' songs.

And no, I'm not kidding :)
 
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