Some input on my edit please

[D.Hatch]

https://newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/379068/member_id/126648/

That would be my edit from this past spring Park and Powder. I would like some advise and input what i can do to improve things. thank you

 

[canterbury]

https://newschoolers.com/ns/content/viewvideo/id/379068/member_id/126648/

 

[D.Hatch]

thanks^

 

[grilledsteezeyo]

i liked it, wasn't crazy about the intro but it was nice to see an intro that didn't start with crazy hand gestures towards the camera. the skiing was good, same with the filming. I would have cut the shot of u putting on the headphones in the beginning earlier, but thats just me. Nice job!