try this:
use a more loose, hand written style font, you can find great free ones on dafont.com (google it) and under handwritten
maybe set it to overlay, then duplicate it, then take opacity down on both layers
as for the skier, it seems far too small
maybe find a picture of his face, a portrait
convert to black and white, select around it loosely, put a white vignette on or a gradient vignette of some sorts, then set the opacity to fairly low and set the layer to something like luminosity
play with the levels/ exposure/colour sat. of both the letteringand the subject, and the original image, and also make the lettering a bit bigger imo and i think itd be really sick
good work anyways and i hope that helps