Rough cuts of two commercials I made... thoughts?

quixotic

quixotic

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One of my local hills hired me to make two 15 second commercials for them that will be airing on TV next winter. I've only ever made videos for fun with my friends so this was an interesting and challenging project. The first one is family oriented and the second is terrain park oriented. These are meant to appeal to the masses (mainy gapers, as the hill gets taken over by the suburbs of Chicago every weekend).

The only thing I was given was a script. One of my friends volunteered to be the voice for the voice over. The song for the family version was made by another friend and the song for the park version was a free one I found on the internet. There are a few small changes I already know I want to make, but I'd like to hear what you guys have to say on this. All constructive criticism is welcome, hit me with any thought you have. Password is Winter.

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Cascade Mountain Commercials from Brandon Luedtke on Vimeo.

 
Haha dude thats sick i wish my mountain would pay me to do that! they were both actually really good, but the only thing i would do is for the second one, you can still use the same voice over, but i would say something about the mountain having good terrain parks.
 
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