Rough Cut, Tourism Video. Critique

kalum.ko

kalum.ko

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Hey M&A,

This is some footage from quite a long time ago that I've just started editing now.

It's for a little series of minute and a half cuts of biking in our home town.

It's really mellow riding, due to the intended audience being families etc. Basically the hope for this film was to highlight a the cross-country riding in our area.

I had troubles finding a song due to licensing issues, as well as some shooting issues along the way.

All and all I think it turned okay though.

Please let me know your thoughts and if you think there are any changes that should be made..

Cheers,

Kalum

Password: draft

TK_XC_DRAFT from Kalum Ko on Vimeo.

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I thought that was pretty awesome, but I just have a few questions.

-What is this going to be shown on? tv, film festival?

-Are you just trying to get people biking around your area?

oh and those last few shots were money.
 
It's being shown to promote people coming to our town for biking. I'm thinking maybe a different song could make it better?
 
No I actually thought the song was a good fit for this type of video, if its for the internet throw a little bit information where and stuff like that? That's what I would think.
 
I loved it! My only critique was that the shot from :16-:20 might've been a little too fast of a pan. Other than that, killer!
 
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