Purple City Project

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New Early Season Edit from Mammoth.

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Shot on T2i w/

Tokina 11-16

Tamron 17-50

Any critiques would be appreciated.

 
that was dope. my critiques:

-I woulda liked more tripod shots.

-I noticed a couple shots where you cut from a follow to a follow of the same trick basically from the same angle and it was a little bit of an awkward transition.

-There were a couple transitions where you should have used a straight cut rather than a cross fade.

-I liked the titles but there were a couple that were moving with the video and then stayed on screen when they should have either faded out or gone off the screen.

-I wasnt sure whether the black and white really worked with the rest of the edit, it seemed sorta random.

I can get you specific scenes for each of these if you want but i just can't see the video from the reply page haha
 
Thanks for the critique. I'm not really sure what you are talking about with cutting from a follow to another follow from the same angle. I think 2 shots i cut from a follow to another follow, but I cut from a follow shot behind the lip to landing shot. I thought those cuts worked well. The black and white was a bit random. I fucked up and filmed using the wrong settings, so most of the black and white I did because the shots would have looked shitty and much different form the others if they were in color.

More tripods shots would have been nice for sure, just didn't get on that enough.

I definitely know what your saying with the titles. Still working on my after effects game.

Thanks again for the critique
 
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