Promo!!

Can you?

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thats not me and i said can you 9 because you should talk shit if you cant do it and no i cant... my best tricks a 7 or front im a filmer
 
it was my first year and not even a full year i get it more now and i put the video up here for my friend and also for tips for me even if your being a fucking dick about it itleast i know what to work on
 
Your friend is not getting sponsered with 7 frontflipsf, 12 threes, some 270s on to a box and 2 straight airs.

Work on everything, framing, camera shake, angles, quality editing. There am I helping yet?
 
the skiing was solid and i dont care if "that jacket makes you look like a tool"... it doesn't matter, wear what you want... what was really annoying though was the fading between clips

each time you did it, it cut into the beginning of the next clip and distracted me from it
 
yea the fades were supose to be shorter they piss me off to they got fucked thanks for the tips and the kids not me but my best friend and he is getting a new out fit.... not the dumont one and i didnt pick the song to copy dumont it was just stuckm in my head
 
You need to learn how to take advice better instead of making excuses on why you did each thing you did in the edit. Just take the advice and use it to make your next edit better.
 
OP. Take the highroad and just let this thread die. Go back to the drawing board, take the couple pieces of useful advice and start fresh. Pretend this whole thing never happened.

Thread. Done.
 
Editing sucked, music was blatantly copied from Simon's edit, and the skiing was okay other than too many frontflips.
 
some people think it's cool to model people. i mean, the suit DOES exist so people can look like simon, right?
 
yes

I bought the first OG simon suit in white and ozone

bit i didnt make an edit with the same suit and song as him
 
What the hell did I just watch?

Use your words better. This is not a promo. If it is, indeed, a promo, then you better ask what the hell it is you are promoting. If your end game is to, um, get spanced, then this will not get you there. I basically just watched a video of somebody who companies want out there as a consumer; decent, but all too willing to abide by (read: pay for) the trend.

Anyway, just because you filmed something doesn't mean you need to include it in the promo. Way too much sketchy shit in there. This is 2011, not 2001. Shit needs to be solid. Grabs. Style. illmatic shit. Don't look at the camera while filming. Better editing and cognizance about what you are actually putting out there. Plus, SIMON DUMONT. No Simon Dumont. This brings me back to why this really isn't a promo: you are making it clear you are an ideal consumer.

This was also way, way, way too long. A good promo should be pretty concise and profound. The exception would be if you are showcasing many facets of skiing, ie park+urban+bc+steep n deep and all that shit. Even still, concise is better. Basically, if this is a promo, you just lost the attention of the viewer quickly by having a million shots, most of which were meh and better left unseen.

Also, don't do POV east coast "powder." This is especially true if you cannot ski "powder," and the "powder" in question could almost be mistaken for snow machine remnants. Yes, they do that POV stuff in all the cool movies, but the reason why it is cool is because... well... it's deep and shit.

I had the music muted (pretty common since most youtube shit is irritating) until I unmuted at around 50 sec. PLEASE USE BETTER MUSIC. CONSIDER YOUR AUDIENCE (read: not a bunch of bitches on NS) IF THIS IS A PROMO

 
pretty sick man..the transition from each clip was slow and kinda annoyed me..but other than that it was cool
 
OP i think i saw you post in another thread that you got your friend sponsored.. did this guy really get sponsored?
 
you are clearly trying to copy simon dumont with your stupid looking outerwear and previously used song. Lame. But hey, at least you are having fun doing it.
 
Zach Mccarthy, or whatever your name is,

1. Stop changing your stories to backup this shitty edit

2. Stop bumping this thread by replying to every piece of hate

3. Work hard on getting better at filming/editing before you release any form of edit next season
 
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