Preseason Palmer Laps - Critique

[j.benziger]

This is my most recent edit of some skiing in preseason. I was trying out tons of new things in this video like my weildy stabilizer and my new Pansonic Gh2. I would love some feedback, so that I can try to improve a little bit more before the season fully kicks into gear.

 

[RockNRollNghtClb]

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[Merlin.]

looked good, could have used some more broll

 

[j.benziger]

That is one thing I always try to remember, but when I am on hill i always tend to forget.

 

[CrotchKiller]

could use some different filming styles, tripod or long follows maybe.

the vignette caused some nasty banding in the sky too

 

[j.benziger]

I now just realized what you are talking about and it does look horrible. Is there anyway to fix that for next time I am shooting with that lens? or do I just have to accept the fact that its always going to be like that with that particular lens?

 

[mvf]

Nice filming, but I'd mix shots up more when editing. Looks like you just layed shots down in the order they were filmed...

 

[j.benziger]

Haha yeah now looking back at my edit it does seem like a I sort of layed it down and slapped some music on it, but I did actually mix up the shots quite a lot. But thanks for letting me know!