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haha, its 22 by 30, I ll post some more here but I also have a bunch up on my face book and am working on more. I learn something from every piece so I would definitely say this is my best so if you check out my face book prepare to be disappointed haha.
but here it is: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Dylan-ART/538010429564035?ref=hl
but here it is: https://www.facebook.com/pages/Dylan-ART/538010429564035?ref=hl
CliffyByro
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sick as per
king.tubby
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ForeverYung
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k-rob, sammm., and tab your stuff on this page is amazing
Meases_Pieces
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Brock.
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I think I agree. Way more cinematic looking. The composition is already far too cluttered, and adding more colours and sharper value transitions with the second one just makes it really chaotic looking and unorganized, also it makes my photo texture overlays way more obvious and awkward looking (it was my first try combining photo textures with paitings). You kind of get lost and confused in the foreground in general. In the first, the foreground is simple and flatter, and the contrast is mostly in the background/landscape, which breaks you out of an otherwise confusing and horrible foreground area. However cliche, I think the lens flares add something 
It's always really useful to look back and critique your work. If you are getting discouraged because after finishing and working really hard you aren't happy with any of your work, don't worry, it means you're improving. The only way to improve is to fail repeatedly.
It's always really useful to look back and critique your work. If you are getting discouraged because after finishing and working really hard you aren't happy with any of your work, don't worry, it means you're improving. The only way to improve is to fail repeatedly.
cultrara
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Final project I wrapped up the other day. Quite a relief to have it done.
FIX from THR3E Clothing on Vimeo.
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FIX from THR3E Clothing on Vimeo.
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CheddarJack
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That was really cool but really weird at the same time. I really liked the editing
cultrara
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Thanks! This technique is called rotoscoping. You draw over each frame individually to get the style you want. I made this by taking individual pictures then opening each one in photoshop, coloring the actor, then adjusting the threshold of the background. This was at 10 frames per second and the video took about 900 unique frames.
Many early Disney movies were made by rotoscoping over actors, which takes forever and really made me respect animation even more.
Many early Disney movies were made by rotoscoping over actors, which takes forever and really made me respect animation even more.
RimJobber
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Alright guys, need a little help.
So i never really got into the whole different hardness of pencils, but I know that if I can start to use them I can start to get better. If anyone has any tips on which ones, how, or any links to videos and stuff, thatd be great. I'm not horrible at pencil, I just need help because theyre all .5 mechanical.
Examples: The one with colored pencil is pencil that I colored after
So i never really got into the whole different hardness of pencils, but I know that if I can start to use them I can start to get better. If anyone has any tips on which ones, how, or any links to videos and stuff, thatd be great. I'm not horrible at pencil, I just need help because theyre all .5 mechanical.
Examples: The one with colored pencil is pencil that I colored after
GNARwalls
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i have a set that ranges from 6H to 8B the higher number in H is a harder pencil so less graphite will be put on the paper which will give it a lighter color. The higher number in B is softer and will put more graphite on the paper which will make it darker. HB is just a middle pencil. use highlights with H's and shadow with B's
fortyvalve
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i know most of you guys actually draw but i am better with photoshop than i am with a pencil and this is my latest creation:
i'm not really sure what it is as it was something that i didn't plan to make, it just came out, so you're free to think of it as whatever you want. i made the entire robot out of only speakers, a shitload of them mind you. it's supposed to be for an album cover but i like it too much to give away
i'm not really sure what it is as it was something that i didn't plan to make, it just came out, so you're free to think of it as whatever you want. i made the entire robot out of only speakers, a shitload of them mind you. it's supposed to be for an album cover but i like it too much to give away
i like this, i would make some more in depth commentary but I would rather not risk the possibility of being a pretentious douche. anyways the one thing i don't like is the grey lines in the foreground/ grass area, get those out of there, other wise it looks pretty sick I know you don't want to but it definitely would work well for an album cover, maybe you can sell it to someone for one.
fortyvalve
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thank you dude! fuck those grey lines aren't supposed to be there. that would be the result of me rushing the clone stamping job. thanks for pointing that out!
Caspaaa
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I like the one you posted before hand better. No clue what you were aiming for as I feel these could be very open to interpretation but from the first one I get the vibe of like a flying pirate ship headed into docking at some station. That being said, the dark/eeriness of the oranges and reds you used in the first version fit my interpretation much better.
don't get me wrong though, both are incredibly dope.
Whoever is posting ceramics stuff, your work is absolutely insane. I love throwing but I'm nowhere near as talented as you are. My main issue is glazing, I always fuck up glazes, and I REALLY mean fuck them up. None come out smooth and glossy for some reason (maybe I'm using the wrong type or too many/few coats?) either way any suggestions would be helpful.
latest writing
The crunching of glass on pavement echoes off
broken dream shelters and white siding
With the wavering street light's company
to guide a misled trip around arbor circle
He walks like a ghost down alleyways
and through the walls of his streets
while their eyes watch from second-floor safety
He's been stringing their words along for miles
to find his way back home
He stops and with a sigh he shoves his hands into his pockets
the warm rain cascading now over unforgiving pavement
onto the landscape below
He can feel them watching his ashen face
He can feel their gaze right through his frame
along with their speculations of that ruined spirit
who walks the streets at night
Letting out the breath;
It doesn't matter if they kill him first
because he knows he'll never die
don't get me wrong though, both are incredibly dope.
Whoever is posting ceramics stuff, your work is absolutely insane. I love throwing but I'm nowhere near as talented as you are. My main issue is glazing, I always fuck up glazes, and I REALLY mean fuck them up. None come out smooth and glossy for some reason (maybe I'm using the wrong type or too many/few coats?) either way any suggestions would be helpful.
latest writing
The crunching of glass on pavement echoes off
broken dream shelters and white siding
With the wavering street light's company
to guide a misled trip around arbor circle
He walks like a ghost down alleyways
and through the walls of his streets
while their eyes watch from second-floor safety
He's been stringing their words along for miles
to find his way back home
He stops and with a sigh he shoves his hands into his pockets
the warm rain cascading now over unforgiving pavement
onto the landscape below
He can feel them watching his ashen face
He can feel their gaze right through his frame
along with their speculations of that ruined spirit
who walks the streets at night
Letting out the breath;
It doesn't matter if they kill him first
because he knows he'll never die
Caspaaa
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one more that i forgot to post up... I'm definitely gonna edit this one
"It's human nature," she said
but I couldn't hear her over the sound of salty waves
the dripping of blood along blue tile
rain pouring over some imperfect reason
She may have called out "I love you"
but I couldn't hear her over my own screaming
in order to block out the silence I feared so much
Put down the perfect glass lens
kill the current that feeds our weary eyes
and cut the circle you've lived inside
stop reading into my veins and every beat of this shallow heart
close two doors and open your life
close your eyes
goodnight
"It's human nature," she said
but I couldn't hear her over the sound of salty waves
the dripping of blood along blue tile
rain pouring over some imperfect reason
She may have called out "I love you"
but I couldn't hear her over my own screaming
in order to block out the silence I feared so much
Put down the perfect glass lens
kill the current that feeds our weary eyes
and cut the circle you've lived inside
stop reading into my veins and every beat of this shallow heart
close two doors and open your life
close your eyes
goodnight
Caspaaa
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+Karma to anybody who posts or pm's me what they think this poem is about/what kind of feelings they get from the poem
a kiss under the blankets in the summer
and the warm showers rolling off of the coastal breeze
then the voices through the receiver
overlooking the sunrise on the seas
a girl on a horse who can't find the off switch to her smile
photographs of unparalleled pride
it's the ignorance of the wind-stung words
that keeps her soul alive
sarcasm never went well over the phone
so i keep her guessing and she pushes me around
we lose ourselves to fear of summer departure
but keep shy glances to the ground
sound sweeps through my tissue and bones
until the life i built melts over the sea
i can't quite put my finger on it
but it's everything i wanted it to be
a kiss under the blankets in the summer
and the warm showers rolling off of the coastal breeze
then the voices through the receiver
overlooking the sunrise on the seas
a girl on a horse who can't find the off switch to her smile
photographs of unparalleled pride
it's the ignorance of the wind-stung words
that keeps her soul alive
sarcasm never went well over the phone
so i keep her guessing and she pushes me around
we lose ourselves to fear of summer departure
but keep shy glances to the ground
sound sweeps through my tissue and bones
until the life i built melts over the sea
i can't quite put my finger on it
but it's everything i wanted it to be
Caspaaa
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thanks man, i'm glad you like it!
keep checking back on this thread occasionally, i post all my writing in here. theres much more to come, but at the same time theres quite a bit on previous pages. most of the stuff i write does not rhyme so it may seem different from the one above but hopefully you'll like them regardless!
keep checking back on this thread occasionally, i post all my writing in here. theres much more to come, but at the same time theres quite a bit on previous pages. most of the stuff i write does not rhyme so it may seem different from the one above but hopefully you'll like them regardless!
Caspaaa
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the pen shattered every solitary dream he had ever hadas it fell thunderously to the tile floor
and the song that forced reevaluation of values
brought twenty years knocking at his door
they shook hands with a murderous look in both their eyes
before silence voiced its say
and in a moment they both knew the secret
so they smiled and turned away
with the slam of the balcony door
the boy picked up a new pen
shoving aside the history notes
he rewrote his story yet again
and the song that forced reevaluation of values
brought twenty years knocking at his door
they shook hands with a murderous look in both their eyes
before silence voiced its say
and in a moment they both knew the secret
so they smiled and turned away
with the slam of the balcony door
the boy picked up a new pen
shoving aside the history notes
he rewrote his story yet again
HolySchimmel
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Really like your stuff! Would post some of my own poems, but they are all in german, so I doubt a lot of people would understand them...
Unless you still want me to ofc, then I will post some
Unless you still want me to ofc, then I will post some
HolySchimmel
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Well that might be kinda senseless for poems, but I will post them as soon as Im not on mobile
HolySchimmel
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1.)
In vielen Menschen lodert Hass,
Krieg wütet ohne Unterlass
Angst und Schrecken wird verbreitet ,
durch Terrorismus ausgeweitet
So mancher sich die Frage stellt,
was läuft nur schief in dieser Welt
In einem kleinen dunklen Zimmer
Hockt ein Mädchen, schuftet schwer
Von nebenan hört man Gewimmer
Dort steht ein Junge mit Gewehr
So mancher sich die Frage stellt,
was läuft nur schief in dieser Welt
Über eine grüne Wiese
weht Nachmittags ein sanfter Wind
Und ohne Kummer, ohne Sorgen
spielt freudig dort ein kleines Kind
Ein Lachen das Gesicht erhellt
Noch ist perfekt, des Kindes Welt
Something about war and children in war
2.)
Man sagt die Zeit heilt alle Wunden
Das Gegenteil kann ich bekunden
Denn lang schon sitzt in meinem Herz
Ein scheinbar unheilbarer Schmerz
Du bist scheints ewig schon
verschwunden
Doch hab ichs noch nicht überwunden
Drum scheint dein Antlitz hell und klar
in meinen Träumen wunderbar,
wie ein strahlend schönder Stern
Herrlich, unerreichbar fern
Die Hoffnung bleibt, der Schmerz
vergeht,
erst wenn mein Auge dich erspäht
Doch ist dein Schicksal ungewiss
So bleibt in meinem Herz ein Riss
Didnt really want to translate them, maybe someone will understand anyway. My english really isnt good enough to find a suitable translation. Sorry for that, maybe I will try later.
In vielen Menschen lodert Hass,
Krieg wütet ohne Unterlass
Angst und Schrecken wird verbreitet ,
durch Terrorismus ausgeweitet
So mancher sich die Frage stellt,
was läuft nur schief in dieser Welt
In einem kleinen dunklen Zimmer
Hockt ein Mädchen, schuftet schwer
Von nebenan hört man Gewimmer
Dort steht ein Junge mit Gewehr
So mancher sich die Frage stellt,
was läuft nur schief in dieser Welt
Über eine grüne Wiese
weht Nachmittags ein sanfter Wind
Und ohne Kummer, ohne Sorgen
spielt freudig dort ein kleines Kind
Ein Lachen das Gesicht erhellt
Noch ist perfekt, des Kindes Welt
Something about war and children in war
2.)
Man sagt die Zeit heilt alle Wunden
Das Gegenteil kann ich bekunden
Denn lang schon sitzt in meinem Herz
Ein scheinbar unheilbarer Schmerz
Du bist scheints ewig schon
verschwunden
Doch hab ichs noch nicht überwunden
Drum scheint dein Antlitz hell und klar
in meinen Träumen wunderbar,
wie ein strahlend schönder Stern
Herrlich, unerreichbar fern
Die Hoffnung bleibt, der Schmerz
vergeht,
erst wenn mein Auge dich erspäht
Doch ist dein Schicksal ungewiss
So bleibt in meinem Herz ein Riss
Didnt really want to translate them, maybe someone will understand anyway. My english really isnt good enough to find a suitable translation. Sorry for that, maybe I will try later.
HWW
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1.)
In many people the hate blazes,
without pause the war rages
fear and terror are spread
by terrorism they are fed
Some ask for all it's worth,
what has gone wrong on this earth
In a room dark and small,
a girl slaves away coy,
from next door a whinging falls,
there with his gun stands a young boy
Some ask for all it's worth,
what has gone wrong on this earth
Over a green meadow,
an afternoon wind softly blows,
without grief or worry,
a child frolics by the rose
Across the child's face a smile is set,
their perfect world is not yet upset
In many people the hate blazes,
without pause the war rages
fear and terror are spread
by terrorism they are fed
Some ask for all it's worth,
what has gone wrong on this earth
In a room dark and small,
a girl slaves away coy,
from next door a whinging falls,
there with his gun stands a young boy
Some ask for all it's worth,
what has gone wrong on this earth
Over a green meadow,
an afternoon wind softly blows,
without grief or worry,
a child frolics by the rose
Across the child's face a smile is set,
their perfect world is not yet upset
HWW
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2.)
It is said that time heals all pain
but the opposite I wish to claim
for since a long time in my heart
this grief my body shall not part
For an eternity you seem to have disappeared
yet still this fate I have not cleared
so always your face shines clear and bright
I encounter you in my dreams at night
such a beautiful sight I have met
magnificent, impossible to get
The hope stays, the pain erased,
when my eye looks upon you
it's uncertain what destiny holds
inside my heart this pain grows old
It is said that time heals all pain
but the opposite I wish to claim
for since a long time in my heart
this grief my body shall not part
For an eternity you seem to have disappeared
yet still this fate I have not cleared
so always your face shines clear and bright
I encounter you in my dreams at night
such a beautiful sight I have met
magnificent, impossible to get
The hope stays, the pain erased,
when my eye looks upon you
it's uncertain what destiny holds
inside my heart this pain grows old