PLS critique my music video!!

[shreddin_apples]

 

[shreddin_apples]

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[shreddin_apples]

thanks sorry i fail at posting

 

[LoathesRaisins]

Tell your friend he needs a new hobby.

 

[shreddin_apples]

Theres nothing wrong with him making music its what he likes to do

 

[shreddin_apples]

Yeah i agree with evrything you said. We only had one day to do the video so it was a bit repetitive along with a repetitive beat/ lyrics. Will be better coming soon

 

[Ski_Alot]

different tones/speeds, rapping about other stuff besides alcohol and weed, more interesting beat.It's kinda boring to listen to honestly

 

[BdoubleU]

Your skills were much better than his...

You did a good match with the lips/lyrics...at least far better than a lot of other beginner filmers.

 

[DaffyDaDak]

less monotone type voice, tell him to put more flava in his voice. and the beat gets kind of boring pretty quick.

 

[shreddin_apples]

would not consider myself a beginner filmer but this was all done freehand, with better equipment and time i could have made the video. I just wanted to know what you guys thought of the videography and vibe of the video. I get bored watching it myself and this is not something i would consider a good work of mine

 

[shreddin_apples]

Agreed. I linked him this tread. Thanks guys