beezey Active member Apr 30, 2008 #1 http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12783153 I could win an ipod and 100$ or something It would really be apreciated
http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12783153 I could win an ipod and 100$ or something It would really be apreciated
.nafus. Active member Apr 30, 2008 #6 done, i tried to read it but it didnt flow with the beat of the song im listening to so i couldnt do it haha
done, i tried to read it but it didnt flow with the beat of the song im listening to so i couldnt do it haha
toominator Active member Apr 30, 2008 #11 I'll give you a 10 too, always good to help another nser out I didn't really get the "I saw the see and have seen the shore" line cause it didn't really seem to have much to do with giving greatness to the poor? also rythem maybe spelt wrong?
I'll give you a 10 too, always good to help another nser out I didn't really get the "I saw the see and have seen the shore" line cause it didn't really seem to have much to do with giving greatness to the poor? also rythem maybe spelt wrong?
beezey Active member Apr 30, 2008 #12 ive saw the see and have seen the shore the ocean is great and the shore is debrees built up from the ocean its a bunch of things that didn't really make it and ended up washed up, so its poor and ya theres prob alot of errors
ive saw the see and have seen the shore the ocean is great and the shore is debrees built up from the ocean its a bunch of things that didn't really make it and ended up washed up, so its poor and ya theres prob alot of errors
feihlination Active member Apr 30, 2008 #15 i gave it a nine, since i am not a natural speaker, i cant really tel how good it is, but i sounds good when you read it, so 9
i gave it a nine, since i am not a natural speaker, i cant really tel how good it is, but i sounds good when you read it, so 9
Hannah. Active member Apr 30, 2008 #36 hey thats a pretty good poem i votedddd good luck hope you win!