Please criticque animation and editing, thx!

rupert_pupkin

rupert_pupkin

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hey, it d be great if you could give me some feedback on my editing and animation works I did on that movie, Intro, Part 1 (Julius) Part 5 (Pius) were done by me, the rest by a friend of mine!thx a lot!
The Startup - a season 07/08 skifilm from gtbmedia on Vimeo.
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i'm assuming your animation stopped after the "startup" title? i was liking it until it faded to black and the titles got super simple. you should've had your friend let you do the titles as well! but yeah i thought it worked pretty well.
 
ok well then i would've spent a bit more time on them then. i was digging the intro but then the fade to black and the simple titles were not up to par with the rest. no hate intended.
 
the beginning title was sick. but you asked for critique so...

your camera on the start title seemed a bit jerky at some points, also when you had the movie title fade in it didnt really flow right to me. i think it would have been better if you had your camera pan onto it and it was already just there.

like said before after that the titles were a bit of a letdown.

im just starting the watch the movie now but it looks sick.
 
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