Oregon Fall Break, road trip video critique

[slc_utahboiii]

I made and "easy edit" video of my week spent in Oregon with my homies, tried a new approach on this video, let me know what you think!

Thanks NS

P.S.- I want to thank all those who have commented or left feedback in the past, NS is a kickass community with some very skilled and knowledgeable people who give a shit about what I give a shit about, so thanks NS I have learned a great deal from you all.[video]https://vimeo.com/144230215[/video]

 

[DorianF]

the shots that moved were really shaky, and i wasnt a fan of the "crop" (if you could call it that? overlay? what is the purpose of it?

some of the stationary shots were pretty good, but that "crop" really detracted from the whole thing

 

[slc_utahboiii]

I was also shooting film photos on that trip so I was going for a 1st hand view through the film camera, I can see how its distracting, the whole video is just straight clips no editing so I was hoping there wouldn't be much for it to distract from, thanks for the feedback!