Newbie my popular demand...

[mammothloc]

Join the carnival

Join the fun

See the freaks

Get ready to run

Lights and screaming

Excitement and mirth

The freaks are in town

Held back by a girth

Welcome to the show

Welcome to bliss

Welcome to hell

A place you won’t miss

Not a carnival

Just the big city

Back streets like hell

Full of pity

Forgotten people

An unknown place

Sections separated

Bye colors and race

-- i am the master of my fate, i am the captain of my soul

 

[DynastarriderGP]

that's cool.

 

[skibum®]

nice, good rhymes

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strangers passing in hte street by chance two separate glances meet... and i am you and what i see is me

 

[Annabelle]

yeah good stuff

ive waited all my life to cross this line into the only thing thats true -ryan cabrera

 

[bigJ]

you need to spell correctly, and "a girth"... tweak that line a little, and the repetition of hell is a little cliche and does not fit well with the rest of the imagery

Hunter S. Thompson
1939-2005

'Soberity is not an option.'

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