New Topsheet Design - In progress

[Harmdeez]

Just wanted some input on my new design, To me there is something missing and i wanted to ask the community what I should add/change/take away?
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/5378/trippytopsheet2.jpg

Now I was thinking the DZ part should be placed differently or a different font. Also maybe cut down on the swirly design since it might be a lil to much.
Tell me what you think?

 

[carbon.pulse]

Get rid of the big dz. Use a less played, for lack of a better word, kind of font for the dz and put it smaller in the black spot halfwayish down the right ski. Also try and incorporate it into the background better or make it more pronounced from the back. My 0.02

 

[dweezileast]

put the dz between where the bindings would go. i think it works for the whole design but it's the kind of thing that should be hidden. That way people see the dope graphic then see that it's also ballin when you take your skis off

 

[Ian.Ham]

this

 

[Harmdeez]

aight ill give it a try, thanks for the input

 

[ski-swagga]

^

 

[KatAttak]

Definitely.

I like the design, the spacey, swirly feel really works.