the artwork of this is good, i like the idea a lot. but the actually tattooing could be improved sooo much!! from the look of the photo after i looked at the bigger one, the lines are so shaky!!
i ask because usually you do the full outline, then shadow, then color because if you mix that up the colors and blacks will end up not matching if you wait long periods between getting tattooed because tattoos change and faid with time and sun.