New series. Thoughts?

Ehhh

Titling was good, colors were pretty decent

but

Intro radio thing was a blatant ripoff of Saga TV, a lot of the shot composition was poor, you were framing him too low and you wouldn't get the pool at all, song didn't work well in that it had a cutoff fade, etc.

Could be better.
 
Dope, and I hope I don't sound like a douchebag. Seriously though, make more, make a ton more, you get better with practice, and you're well on your way.
 
Nah man I appreciate it for sure. I've seen your videos on Vimeo, they're tight. Hopefully I'm making like 10 or so of these "one hour with" videos, so I'll be getting plenty of practice.
 
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