fuck media and arts, your just a bunch of bitches these days! you just criticize and dont give good advice.
What I think: I fucking love the shots, I think its a solid base to what the final clip could be.
how you can save it from boredom? I would go with the creepy vibe and shoot some high contrast shots (like this) of sketchy shit. Like rats eating meat, nail bitting, shit rotting... what ever you can come up with.
I think its a solid start... better than what I get to shoot! I like how you got to go orriginal on the style which is something I can never get silly rappers to do. They always insist on looking fly.