New edit, take a look! feedback appreciated!

Meant to comment on this before, sorry.

Slow motion is done well, the way you ramped it with the landings.

Audio on landings is good.

Wind seems to be a bit of a problem with your audio though, also it seems to get a bit cluttered with the song, maybe just using the sound of landings would sort that? IDK

Overexposed at points(think it was near the end noticably).

Take out the shuffled landings, just makes it bad(0:35 for example)

A bit shaky at times, that's something to work on. not unwatchable though.

I appreciate that your lighting wasn't the best, but still a good edit.

What was your setup?
 
rode video mic, t2i, flycam 3000, tamron 17-50 non vc

and yeah the over exposed shots were pretty noticeable. Its annoying because our park is mainly sun deprived due to the trees surrounding it, but then there's one point where there are no trees, so thats why that one shot on the up rail is super overexposed. idk what to do about it really haha
 
The ones I saw that were overexposed weren't blown out. Just decrease the highlights, the details still there(If you tilt your screen you'll see it)
 
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