Need constructive criticism

[TheShire]

getting started. just trying to have fun with it all. please share what would look better or whatever anything. all old footage i didnt want to post anything new yet. thanks
ACL post-op boredom from Andre Bertoncin on Vimeo.

 

[TheShire]

fuckk oops just click on the link... Thankshttp://vimeo.com/11221881

 

[tom.skier]

looking good man, I like it!