My very own photo thread!

[PeterWojnar]

Here's some work from this summer so far... with one exception that I submitted to BIKE mag and won't be posting online until they either publish it or tell me they won't.

Lets have a nice hard photobashing session that I might learn something from. Shall we?

 

[Jordan]

no need for photo bashing!
Everything is looking really good, too bad that one bro is taking a picture in that longer exposure shot

But yeah man, looking good!

 

[Jordan]

Guess I'll post some CC - not a huge fan of 4,5,7
4 has a nice capture but the photo isn't really interesting.
5 is kind of a boring shot, I like the leading lines, but there's really not that much going on in the photo.
7 has good framing, but it's lacking something, a little too "framed" if you will. Maybe try getting closer to the sign and shooting it at an angle, low aperture, wall blurred - that's the first thing that popped into my head - something like that?
Hope that helps a little?

 

[PeterWojnar]

Thanks for the crit, Jordan. Unfortunately I can't reshoot any of these, since they're in France and Poland and I'm in California now.

I agree with your crits except about that dude standing there taking a picture... if you click for full res, he's actually really sharp, and I think it shows how few people stop to enjoy the scenery while everyone else is too busy pretty well. Plus he balances out the composition a bit. But that's just my opinion