My ski edit

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Ok so i just started skiing park last season i onkly learned a little bit but i still decided to throw toghether a quick vid. Constructive critisim would be nice.karma plus for feedback
 
the beguinning was okay, but the end was so sparatic i understand what you were trying to get at with it but it just doesnt flow well whatsoever also, hit some jumps and i dunno it wasnt very steezed out but it was sick otherwise, again this isnt ripping on you just constructive criticism and good luck working on it
 
ok thanks for the advice

That was the first time I tryed anything like that at the end so I guess Ill have to work on that
 
my jumps suck right now

All I can do are safety 360s and crappy 540s but this season want to get some more grabs and spins
 
fuck man not bad for your firsty year skiing park.

Not a huge fan of the song and a little variety would be nice, maybe hit some tables.

keep it up
 
keep your arms down, cut your poles, and try and get in a more "athletic position" you know like bend your knees as bit ....not full on gorilla steeze but lower than you are.
 
Dang dude, looks good for first year skiing park. Try taking some of the stuff you did on those boxes and do it on rails. Also get some jumps in there of course... learn some inverts like a front or backflip, they are fairly easy(once you get the courage to try them) and they look sick. keep doin what youre doin and youre gonna get good
 
really sick for your first year !

but remember, just because the song is girl talk (i think), does not make it good.
 
in the beginning, i would cut off some stuff. less of skiing up to the rail, and more of the rail itself.
 
It wasnt bad considering it was your first year. I would say work on keeping your hands at your side on rails it looks way cleaner. Also start practicing lifting your front font up a bit so you can begin to pretzel. Other then that your doing great for your first year in rails.

Now as far as jumps go even if your not great i would definitely still be practicing. The more you do threes and 5s the better you'll get just keep working on the grabs. And also start hitting things switch. Also just start hitting all the jumps so you are confident.
Keep up the good work.
 
Pretty good for first year. Like people have said above, a bit baggier clothes would help you look smoother and just work on your style as well as getting shorter poles. You might want to look into longer skis? They look really short?
 
i thought it was pretty good for a first year person. The only thing is loosen up when you do your rails. Maybe try some jumps.
 
thats actually really good skiing for your first year. good stuff

suggestions: i would suggest to bend your knees more on rails to get more balance and it makes your look like you have more control.

dont wind up so much when you spin onto boxes, its more about just following the spin with your shoulders first.

try to get some jumps in there

other then that i would say you did a good job. buy some sick outerwear.. like XL shit.. that would look sick
 
you r a good skier. get some center mounted skis and you will be set. the only reason the edit was medicore was becuase the filming was shitty. other than that respect
 
i wsh i could go out to utah again this season but I think im doing south shor soldiers camp this spring break
 
Better than me for one year of park skiing but you need more jumps. For editing rails, unless you really steeze them out, I think it's better to play them in normal speed and not slo-mo.
 
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