I've honestly been anticipating reading this in class so much, I did it really early because someone told me it was due this monday, but it's not due until monday. I will post what grade I get and comments from my teacher.
No, other kids in my class will right about pretty stupid stuff. Probably something about the opposite sex or like some girl who got raped, lame shit usually.
yeah I was pissed about it, I copy and pasted my rough draft onto here, because I was eager for some critiques, but I corrected all the typos when I handed it in.