My own bike Edit need critique !

I enjoyed that! Really mellow. Intro could maybe be cut down a little. With such a short edit maybe knock it down a little. Otherwise awesome!
 
voila. enjoy and comment. this is not my final version so some tips would be useful:)

password: trialbike

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btw im the rider, the filmer and the editor. only pan shots were made by my friend. i did choose my camera angles so if you have tips on how i should have place my camera, i would be more than happy to know it.

my english sucks i know hahha sorry.

seb
 
Very nice! you're improving fast from that edit you posted like a month ago.

I understand you weren't filming, but try and do something other than pans, there were too many pans.
 
just different angles, tilting, focus pulls, you have a glidecam so play around with that too.

Id say avoid zooming in or out with a dslr. It's a very unfluid movement, and zooming kinda looks bad in my opinion.
 
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