My new rap group ~criticism welcome~

SlimDunkin.

SlimDunkin.

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Crew Name... PENIS Peace Eliminating Necro Influenced Sodomizers

Lyrics to our new dis song

This goes out to Drake, Smash your face with a rake

leave you screamin', with your butthole wreaking of seamen

this is no ordinary creamin this is a release of demons

fill you up and slurp it like a cup

fuck you in the butt and rupture a nut

lying on the floor being passed like a whore

daddy cant help you anymore

not even god knows whats in store

a knife in the gut and a dick in the butt

the deadly combination of a slut

dick starts to spout when i hear you pout,

kinda smells like sour crout

a whip from the dick and your knocked out

changin up the scheme moving on to a double team

standing on a pillar cast a hook to mac miller

jerk it up and fucking reel her

intestines out the mouth now he knows im a killer

hold him down and go to town apparently he's a squealer

no where to be found because hes underground

where he cant make another sound

soulja boy makin all the cash

too bad he missed out on his brothers car crash

PENIS is takin out the trash

as we grab a bat and begin to bash

not another soul he will annoy

bye bye baby boy

lil wayne not paying his taxes

head to the shed and grab our axes

a blow to the head and his body relaxes

hes about to know what anal attack is

gonorrhea is no longer just a song

pass the infection when i slip in my dong

6 foot 7 foot try 5 foot 3

this f***** can suck a dick without droppin a knee

his aims not the best

he put a bullet in his chest

we reopen the wounds

as we dig into his tiny brain with spoons

what is this world coming to

are we the only real crew

take notes LCP
 
6 foot 7? try 5 foot 3

This fuck can suck a dick without dropping a knee

That part is fucking amazing.
 
this is what me and 5 of my friends sound like when were freestyling to an instrumental in my basement drunk on a sunday night..
 
you just rapped about raping people pretty much this is just weird the best rap comes from real life experiences and you just seem like some skinny white kid so learn to play the guitar
 
odd future copycat basically, but hey nothing wrong with that, here's mine:

I’m the monster you were scared about when you were a little kid

Lurking in the shadows of your room I’m hiding in your closet

Set up a hidden camera to film what I’m about to do you

Cause I’m bona fide rapist girl and I’m coming straight for you

My dick is a knife

And i use it to stab you in the face

Repeatedly

Then cum in your hair

Take a step back

And admire the imagery

Everything I do

Is meant to be satisfactory

Including rape, murder, and sodomy

Let me study your anatomy

As the madness crawls inside of me

Bitch

These videos should make me rich

At least I hope

Unless I get carried away and slit your throat

And have to destroy the evidence

If I don’t want to be sentenced

To life in prison

And spend my days

Getting raped by bald men

And have my anus loosened

 
I'de have no problem with it as long as it stays raw like OF. Too bad everyone will force it and it will suck dick. Thats basically it.
 
god i hope not. I dont like odd future but i do respect what there doing i guess, its all just fucking weird stuff haha.
 
When I was starting to get into odd future awhile back I thought to myself "this is great, they are saying some raw stuff and it's fool proof; no stupid douches will like it because they rap about everything stupid douches hate. Right?" wrong. Now there are going to be a bunch of stupid douches saying the most disguisting thing they can think of with minimal talent...let odd future do their thing.
 
"We don't make horrorcore you fucking idiots. Listen deeper to the lyrics before you put it in the box." - Tyler the CreatorHe says it at the end of "Sandwitches" if you are curious
 
everybody who thinks this is an odd future rip-off is a dumb. He references their influence in their name, Necro. horrorcore has been around for a fucking minute, and odd future isn't even close to being offensive as far as that genre goes. do some fucking research and maybe branch out from listening to the one band/genre who's dick is being ridden by NS that week.
 
god that was bad. your just blatantly copying odd future. There's no creativity with your stuff, you're just making it as gross as you can
 
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