My Film's Trailer

It felt more like a demo reel to me than a trailer for a narrative film. Maybe have some more exposition overlayed with the action stuff. Or whatever, it's just a trailer.
 
I can agree. However, 30 of the 35min of the film is narrative with little montage. I really just wanted to keep people guessing, not give away too much and leave you intrigued. But yeah, next trailer I might give more exposition.
 
That was a cool trailer. I liked the sneaky use of ski masks and buffs in the movie though hahah.
 
Looks funny. I don't think you need a ton more exposition, maybe just set up that the kid is trying to pay for college so the audience understands the "tuition" part. I would have liked a little more sound design during the montage section to amp up the action along with the music track and a more aggressive color pass would better sell your production value. It worked though; definitely sells the tone of the film.
 
Smiled pretty much all the way through that. I'm looking forward to being able to see the whole thing :)

Like ^ said, the trailer doesn't really reference tuition, if I didn't read the description I wouldn't be able to tell that there was much of a storyline at all.

I'm not too keen on the colours at the dinner table, but I think that's the kind of critique that's pointless without context (i.e. the full movie).
 
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