well i think that you are an amazing skier, but it was all conveyed through these tricks:
cork 7 japan
cork 9 japan
dub cork 12? it looks like you didn't land them, but you were extremely close and i'm sure will get them/it soon.
in my opinion those tricks you did were amazing, incredible i would even say because they were so smooth, stomped, etc. but, i think that your edit as a whole was not up to par with some other ones with lesser tricks, but more variety. i'd rather see a few rodeos, a few corks, some switch stuff, some unnatural stuff in addition to what you already threw in there. you are doing dub corks, please tell me that you can rodeo or at least switch 7. haha
so i guess i'm trying to say that you are a great skier, but it got a little repetitive.
regardless, nice edit, i can tell you're really good and have potential. really liked the pipe shots too. good luck dude! by the way, whis is so fun!