M.Elihu February Edit

I liked it. It was short but you got a lot of shots in. Cant wait to see what you guys come out with.
 
maybe the shot of the garage going down was a little long, but then again it was a slow tempo, i liked it overall
 
I thought that the shots you got were pretty good but the ratio of your non skiing shots to skiing shots wasn't very good imo.
 
Two things really stood out to me. The first one was when you were panning and then you suddenly switched to the still shot of the keypad and then went back to panning. The second was that in a lot of the skiing shots the whites were blown out so it made it uncomfortable to watch. Other than those two things i quite enjoyed it.
 
dont include shots where its obvious that the guy fell (50 seconds), a quick cut doesnt make him land the trick
 
This. If that's the look you're going, try to keep it more consistent, especially with such a short edit. It's not really a big deal, I only noticed because I was looking for issues because you said to critique. It's still a great edit, I really enjoyed it.
 
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