the music wasn't honestly bad, the video though.. It was just scenic time-lapses over a shaky video of you singing. I would take a whole different approach if I were you. I can't say what; maybe something a bit more scripted. With nice portrait shots. Something deep though.
thanks for tha feedback bro i agree i was going for something simple wit the video to get the message of the song across. wont take your opinion lightly tho! turn up