Looking for honest feed back on a short film

[spruitm]

good? bad? did you understand it? we left it pretty open.

 

[goneforever]

Same over here. Good job!

 

[Panchuk]

That was really good!

Just kinda botherd me how monotone the guy in the green was..

 

[wellpreparedrare]

i enjoy how dumb people can be, take sum painkillers

 

[scott23~]

silly pink names.

 

[yojimbo]

it wasn't very good I'm sorry to say. keep trying. a good start i guess?

 

[infedel_one]

haha yah i lilked it pretty goood...i also get whats happening...my only feedback is like the other dudes, try and get some emotion into the green guy....i mean yah he's prolly depressed in the situation but put some feeling and emotion in there and its set...keep it up

 

[spruitm]

well, thats better than i was expecting. it was for a summer class and we were all kind of sick of the class so we just threw it together. we didnt feel like finding actors