Longboard Critique?

yeah the first part was too dark for sure and watch your titles there at the end. make sure they are in the "title safe" zone, or at least on the screen and you couldn't see the name on the last person because the shot was dark and the font was black, brighten the shots or try white text on that dark background
 
ease with the super "Artsy" shots, you don't need a tree branch or a leaf in every shot to make your sheeit quality
 
Two things that I noticed right off the bat were the longboard sitting off of the path in the shot at :28 I don't know if you wanted it there or not but I always make sure I don't have random stuff that doesn't really belong in my shots. and second was when you faded your music out at :30 It was very abrupt and I think adding a disolve in between the shots would have made it much smoother.
 
Forsure. yah that was my board accidentally. and i couldnt figure out how to add two seperate volume envelops on the same audio line. thanks for the input

 
Forsure, i wasn't sure like how much to make full riding just because its a preview. im kind of a rookie as well haha. thanks for the input.
 
And the riders were not good at all! It looked like it was there first weekend riding. I thought the filming was good though.
 
Thanks dude, yah we don't really take it that seriously. for the longer video we're gonna be sure to get some more slides and technical stuff.
 
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