Little short video: The Times (and yes there is a bit of skiing)

jibcrew1

jibcrew1

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Pretty stoked on how this came out didnt do a lot of color correcting because i just wanted to leave more of its natural straight out of camera look and thought they all fit nicely together and for all the shots i tried to tell a short story of just sum up a scene in one or two shots and any advice would be nice but i probably wont be doing anything like this until next spring but would still like to see what people think

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Holy fucking run on sentence. Don't ever intro to a video with such poor grammar, it just makes you sound and seem stupid.

Secondly, I watched this earlier and didn't really like it. It was just a bunch of random shots to me and it didn't even tell much of a story, there wasn't any emotion. Not to be harsh, but really it just needs improvement in all regards. Better filming - take time to compose your shots and get the one you want, better editing - even out the clips so they look similar and the video flows well, etc. Just make a lot of stuff and you'll get there.
 
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