The song goblins is a cool idea, but was lacking musical knowhow -its was so out of time it was ridiculous. I'm also not a fan of the extreme dynamics it kind of seemed like an attempt to do something different but was just kind of "off". Also, I think you could do with thinning out the texture - some bands can pull off the really thick sound, like Broken Social Scene. I think the melody is kinda lost in all the "filler" sounds.
I think it has potential but just needs a little work.