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[JamesO]

Here's my trampoline edit I made in like an hour with my brother- k+ for suggestions on trampoline or editing- I know I didn't do an awesome job on either so I need some help.
http://instagram.com/p/nUX0GLgamW/

 

[cydwhit]

Quick critique, don't ever film with the phone in portrait mode like that please, for an insta edit cut all the bouncing and just show the tricks.

 

[S.J.W]

Just show the bounce prior to the jump and once you stick it cut to another jump. Try and ensure you have a good song which flows, so that means don't put 180 psytrance and slow mo together etc. Cut the black bits away and stabilise your shots. And have the first bounce and drop go together.

 

[scarsimd]

yeah sick man

 

[JamesO]

Quick critique, don't ever film with the phone in portrait mode like that please, for an insta edit cut all the bouncing and just show the tricks.

thanks, I realized ow awful that looked afterwards but i didnt know if it would be any better by just holding the ipod sideways, will it?

 

[cydwhit]

thanks, I realized ow awful that looked afterwards but i didnt know if it would be any better by just holding the ipod sideways, will it?

It will be all the way better if you hold the iPod sideways